Rejected Optimus Prime - Hard

[Aeris16]

Makers: Aeris16 (Builder), actionman1008 (Parkourist)
Map Name: Optimus Prime
Plot Name: /plot tp Aeris16 2 or /plot tp optimus (*)
Difficulty: Hard
Jumps: 72
Checkpoints: 5

*the build/pk coords are -15189 x and 20376 z bc of hard direction restrictions

Tags because I can't add new ones: transformers, robot, alien, humanoid, character, movie

 

[Hayleyx]

Hello!

Sorry for the late response.
Unfortunately, your map is being REJECTED.

The theme is original, so good job on that!
The build is accurate; however, the overall build does need to be more bulky throughout, especially the bottom of the legs. In addition, the face needs reshaping.

The parkour has great variation, so good job on that! Unfortunately, the parkour was inconsistent with some parts being too hard/harder than the rest of the map. Jumps like double neos should not be in a hard map.

We hope to see more maps from you in the future.
Have a good day/night
-Hayley