Accepted Re-submission - "Thumbs Up"

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Username: Tate_C
Map Name: Thumbs Up
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/plot v Tate_C 1
Difficulty: Medium
Jumps: 46

Built solely by me (Tate_C) in around 3 hours. I fixed the parkour tremendously and made it a lot less confusing. Sorry about the impossible jumps from my last submission, I don't play on 1.8.9 so I didn't realize they were impossible. I tested this one in 1.8.9 though and I believe all of the jumps are possible. I also added some more details like the nails just because it looked a bit plain and simple before.

I hope you like the improved version, thanks for checking it out!
- Tate
 

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+0.5. The build is decent, I think that the flesh before the fingers can be improved (make a thumbs-up with your hand, the skin bunches up) and he has a bad case of hitchhikers thumb (which might have been what you were going for, I don't know). If possible, you could shade the hand to give the build a bit more block variation.
The parkour is a fitting length and the jumps seem suitable for a medium map.
As far as I can tell, the theme is original, as well.
Best of luck!
 
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+0.5. The build is decent, I think that the flesh before the fingers can be improved (make a thumbs-up with your hand, the skin bunches up) and he has a bad case of hitchhikers thumb (which might have been what you were going for, I don't know). If possible, you could shade the hand to give the build a bit more block variation.
The parkour is a fitting length and the jumps seem suitable for a medium map.
As far as I can tell, the theme is original, as well.
Best of luck!
Thank you!
 

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This does seem like a good and original idea for a map, but for the reasons MCBYT says it is getting a 0.5.
Good look anyway!
 

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Hey Tate_C,

I'm happy to be able to tell you that your map has been ACCEPTED. The theme is most definitely original, as I've yet to see a hand or any extremity for that matter be built! The build is simple, attractive, and depicts a thumbs up well. Also, the addition of nails made it look way more like a hand. The PK length and difficulty fit the medium difficulty, there was substantial variation in jump/block usage, and no longer had confusing/impossible jumps as compared to your previous submission. Overall, job well done! I hope to see more submissions from you in the future!
 
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