Rejected Roller Coaster - Expert - Resubmission

[_iJoinedTheGame]

Creator: _iJoinedTheGame
Name: Roller Coaster
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Difficulty: Expert
Jumps: 70
Checkpoints: 5
All jumps tested.

 

[ILeftTheGame_]

Decent map, the jumps are hard enough for expert, good variety of blocks, and the theme is pretty original as there are no roller coaster maps! my vote is +1

 

[oWinqs]

Looks a lot better now! Will check out the parkour soon to see if that has improved.

 

[PyroTortilla]

Finally a good expert map submission. I’ll look for any skips when I get home from dinner, and I’ll DM you on Discord if I find any.

 

[oWinqs]

aahhh, much better! I love what you've done with the barrier blocks, makes it much more clear. The parkour is varied, which is always nice to see, and the build looks a lot better now. It's a +1 from me. I can't wait to see more of your maps!

 

[_iJoinedTheGame]

aahhh, much better! I love what you've done with the barrier blocks, makes it much more clear. The parkour is varied, which is always nice to see, and the build looks a lot better now. It's a +1 from me. I can't wait to see more of your maps!

Finally a good expert map submission. I’ll look for any skips when I get home from dinner, and I’ll DM you on Discord if I find any.

Decent map, the jumps are hard enough for expert, good variety of blocks, and the theme is pretty original as there are no roller coaster maps! my vote is +1

Thanks for the support and feedback!

 

[MCBYT]

I still think the build could be improved, something as simple as widening the track would help immensely. The barrier labelling is great though, and the parkour diversity looks much better, so hopefully you'll be accepted this time! Good luck!

 

[Presidenten]

The map has definitely improved, the parkour is much clearer and better and fit the difficulty, though one jump is impossible in 1.8
The build is pretty much the same, and it could be better, as mcbyt said, by making the track wider. Good luck!

 

[_iJoinedTheGame]

I went through the map in 1.8 and fixed the impossible jump, thanks for reporting it!

 

[Luci]

Hi!

Unfortunately, I will be rejecting this map for the following reasons;
Firstly, I would like to say that the map has greatly improved from the last submission, great job! But, I and some other staff found it a bit messy while going through the parkour, especially with the floating jumps, it makes the build look messy. We also found the Parkour to be a bit too easy for the Expert difficulty as well as finding it a little bit repetitive with the vines, brewing stands, and enchantment tables, but still really improved from the last submission!

I'd recommend submitting this again and making some changes to what I mentioned above.
Thanks for taking the time to create, and submit this map. I'd love to see more from you in the future!
Luci