Accepted Eye of Cthulhu - Easy

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  • Bunstop & MagicTurtleYT
  • Eye of Cthulhu (try pronouncing it c: )
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  • /plot v Bunstop 12
  • Easy
  • 28 Jumps
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Hey Bun <3,

(Kah-thu-lu?) Anywho I will be giving this a 0 +1. I believe the theme is original, since I've never seen anything like it. The build is very good and well-detailed; however, it may be considered messy. I recommend using something other than red wool for the veins. The jumps are well-varied, and based on length, it fits the easy difficulty.

I wish you the best of luck! <3

(Changed vote due to edits)
 
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Hey Bun <3,

(Kah-thu-lu?) Anywho I will be giving this a 0. I believe the theme is original, since I've never seen anything like it. The build is very good and well-detailed; however, it may be considered messy. I recommend using something other than red wool for the veins. The jumps are well-varied, and based on length, it fits the easy difficulty.

I wish you the best of luck! <3
Thank you for the feedback c: I have changed the red wool to redstone (and the white wool to quartz)
 

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So I'm gonna put this submission into REVIEWING. This means you'll be given a maximum of one month to fix what we believe can be fixed about your map to make it an accept...

Things you need to fix:
- The red is very messy at the back and would be nice to use variety of different red blocks
- The parkour is too difficult for an easy, so either nerf it or buff it and change to medium

Let me know in this thread once you have updated your map and I'll take another look at it. If you don't respond within a month I'll just reject the map. Thanks for submitting
 

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So I'm gonna put this submission into REVIEWING. This means you'll be given a maximum of one month to fix what we believe can be fixed about your map to make it an accept...

Things you need to fix:
- The red is very messy at the back and would be nice to use variety of different red blocks
- The parkour is too difficult for an easy, so either nerf it or buff it and change to medium

Let me know in this thread once you have updated your map and I'll take another look at it. If you don't respond within a month I'll just reject the map. Thanks for submitting
I have added red wool and red terracotta along with the redstone blocks, and MagicTurtleYT has revamped the parkour (I have added him to the creators list). I changed a little bit on the end of the eye but it was hard to make the blood vessels straight and keep it true to what I'm basing it off of, so I didn't do a lot to fix it
 

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Hey Bunstop, thanks for making those changes. We're happy to accept your map now. The build is much more attractive (although imo a bit messy but it looks good) and the parkour fits the difficulty very well now. Good job!

Thanks for submitting, we'd love to see more maps from you!
 
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