Rejected PeteyPiranha - Hard

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Map Creator: GamersDecision
Map Name: PeteyPiranha
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Map Difficulty: Hard
Jumps: 60
Checkpoints: 5
Theme: Mario Series

Thanks for checking out my submission! If you have any advice, critique or just anything to say then please share it here! I would appreciate it a lot :)

EDIT: I have nerfed the last jump of the map since it was slightly too hard.
 

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I really like this one! (I think) the theme is original, and the build looks great. The parkour definitely fits the hard difficulty, and it is varied and fun. My only issue is with this jump:
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I'm not sure if this jump is possible or not, but even if it is, it is way too hard and/or inconsistent, especially considering it's the last jump of the map. I would recommend adding another ladder, but there are other ways of nerfing it. Other than that, I hope this gets accepted!
 

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I really like this one! (I think) the theme is original, and the build looks great. The parkour definitely fits the hard difficulty, and it is varied and fun. My only issue is with this jump:
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I'm not sure if this jump is possible or not, but even if it is, it is way too hard and/or inconsistent, especially considering it's the last jump of the map. I would recommend adding another ladder, but there are other ways of nerfing it. Other than that, I hope this gets accepted!
Thanks for the review! That jump is possible by wall bouncing with the water. I personally don't find that jump even close to one of the hardest jumps in the map but I can see it being difficult to some players. I'll try to adjust it tomorrow! :)
 

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There is a map that is a Piranha from Mario, and I really feel like we should stop building/accepting Mario maps altogether. The build and parkour look fine as always. Good luck.
 

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There is a map that is a Piranha from Mario, and I really feel like we should stop building/accepting Mario maps altogether. The build and parkour look fine as always. Good luck.
This is an extremely valid point.
 

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Hey Gamers!

I'm very sad to say that this map is being rejected. The theme and build are the main issue with this map unfortunately. The Mario series is a very unoriginal theme as a whole. On top of that, we already have a Piranha map (Piranha) which is very well built. While Petey is a little different, they are too similar, sadly. I also feel the build could have been executed a bit better. The shape of the head doesn't capture the proper roundness of Petey's head, and his body is a bit awkward (I think the arms and body are a victim of the scale, since they lack detail). The build overall feels a bit rushed.

The parkour, however, is really great! I'm not really surprised about this, though. I enjoyed the forgiving nature of the map with some of the more precise jumps and the failsafe interior. It was fun to play, fit the difficulty, and was varied and mixed throughout. The parkour made me a bit disappointed about the theme and build, as the parkour is good otherwise.

Thank you for submitting this map! If you have any remaining questions, feel free to talk to me here on the forums or in-game! Hope to see more maps from you soon :)
 
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