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  1. AlfieJay

    Rejected River Journey / Easy

    -1 The build is very unattractive and the name isn't very fitting at all. The parkour is really bunched together and some of the jumps are a little hard. Other then that the parkour was nicely varied and relatively enjoyable Just to clarify, this is NOT a final response but just my opinion ;D
  2. AlfieJay

    Accepted Xmas Factory / Dropper

    +1 Another good looking, really hard map. well done xD
  3. AlfieJay

    Rejected Heads

    +1 The map idea is simple yet good. It's about right for an easy map and it was enjoyable to play. Only points of criticism, the parkour in between the heads was kind of boring and repetitive and I would've liked to see more heads in the map! Just to clarify, this is NOT a final response but...
  4. AlfieJay

    Rejected -Dropper- Library {Very Hard}

    -1 As mentioned before it's really unoriginal as there is already a dropper called library. The actual dropper itself was quite difficult, especially in comparison to the droppers that are currently being used. Other than that the design was nice to look at and the actual dropper was fun to...
  5. AlfieJay

    Accepted Punisher ~ Easy Map

    -1 I thought that the parkour was a little bit too difficult for easy level. On top of that it was quite unclear at parts where you needed to go, I still have no idea how to get from the slime to the first checkpoint. Other then that the build was quite nice and the parkour was varied. Good...
  6. AlfieJay

    Rejected Is this loss? Medium map

    -1 The map is based around a 2d build, which is an immediate red flag. On top of that the colour scheme was very monotone and the build was quite boring. Other then that the parkour was quite fun and the parkour was quite varied. Good luck! Just to clarify, this is NOT a final response but...
  7. AlfieJay

    Rejected KoalaPK - Medium

    -1 I found two major problems with the map. Firstly it's a bit plain. The entire map is based around on build so it's quite bare. Second there are two easy exploits. Once you've done the neo if you jump to the koala's arm you can run along and skip almost half the map. As well as that you can...
  8. AlfieJay

    Rejected DreamCatcher - Easy

    -1 The main bit of the parkour was REALLY repetitive which kind of ruined the whole thing for me. Other then that, the build was really nice to look at and the theme was really nice. If this map gets denied I would consider just changing the parkour but keeping the physical structure because it...
  9. AlfieJay

    Rejected Village / Easy

    -1 Too short and quite close together. The map didn't look too realistic and it was super quick. Other then that the pakrour was quite fun and varied! Good luck! Just to clarify, this is NOT a final response but just my opinion ;D
  10. AlfieJay

    Rejected Zombie // Hard

    +0 The map looked great and the parkour was vaired and fun. However at certain parts it was quite unclear where you have to go and the parkour doesn't MASSIVELY incorperate the actual zombie but just goes alongside it Just to clarify, this is NOT an official response but just my opinion ;D
  11. AlfieJay

    Rejected Diamond Rush

    -1 The jumps were quite repetitive and not that fun to do. On top of that most of the map is just floating blocks which aren't THAT attractive. I liked the diamond ore pixel art though and in some parts there was a quite nice mixture of parkour. Good luck! Just to clarify, this is NOT an...
  12. AlfieJay

    Rejected Antarctica PK

    +1 Great map, very enjoyable. Only drawback is that the theme isn't very original. Good luck though! :D Just to clarify, this is NOT a finalised accept but just my opinion ;D
  13. AlfieJay

    Rejected Mario mushrooms / medium

    +1 Great map, very enjoyable, nothing negative to say :D Just to clarify, this is NOT a finalised accept but just my opinion ;D
  14. AlfieJay

    Rejected Toy Story Parkour: Medium

    +1 I think the build looked really good and was fun to test out. However I think that MAYBE the build should be hard? I'm not that great at judging difficulties but I think it would fit hard more than medium. It's up to you what you do with it though. Anyway good build, good luck getting it...
  15. AlfieJay

    Rejected Parkour "Parthenon" - Medium

    +1 Looks nice, the parkour was enjoyable and was an overall fun experience. The only point of criticism is that the theme isn't very unique. Great map and good luck getting it accepted! Just to clarify, this is NOT a finalised accept but just my opinion ;D
  16. AlfieJay

    Closed _DiamondStone

    -1 The parkour is really repetitive and the build isn't that nice to look at. Most of the parkour focusses around one build and the rest is in the middle of nowhere. Other than that there was a nice vary in the parkour. Good luck on getting a map accepted Just to clarify, this is NOT a...
  17. AlfieJay

    Rejected Yeezus Parkour - Medium

    -1 The map swaps between easy and hard, meaning it should really be a hard map. Next the only build that you have really incorporated with the actual parkour is Kanye West. I would recommend that you have more parkour around the other objects in the map. Other then that, the builds looked...
  18. AlfieJay

    Closed Blue by RandomGuy0 - Easy

    -1 Sorry to take up your time only to give you a -1 however the map had no interesting theme and nothing really to look at. The parkour was varied though and nice to do, it just needs a good theme and something to look at in the map Just to clarify, this is NOT a finalised answer but just my...
  19. AlfieJay

    Closed Blue by RandomGuy0 - Easy

    Please can you follow the proper submission format otherwise no one can successfully assess your map :/
  20. AlfieJay

    Rejected McDonalds map (Medium) by Nicothenic

    +0 The map looks good and the parkour is varied but the map is quite small and short. I think it would be better if you added more structures to the build and made the parkour a little bit longer. Also the fries look quite unrealistic and considering they're a third of the map's build I would...