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  1. AlfieJay

    Rejected Fortnite Parkour - Easy/Medium

    Response: Thanks for replying! I'm sorry if I came off as rude, I just think it's better for people to know what's wrong with their build rather than one or two little problems someone sugar-coated. Again, I don't mean to be rude, sorry if you felt offended :P Notice: This keeps popping up and...
  2. AlfieJay

    Rejected Elemental

    Response: Well if that's the case, I'd still like to see it (I still hate my choice of building...). I was getting worried because I thought you meant like a straight parallel to my map :P
  3. AlfieJay

    Rejected Perspective

    Vote: +1 Response: Great map. I have no idea Appledestroyer is on about. The parkour had variation and the theme, the building, was pleasing to the eye. The only thing you could improve is the empty space in the middle of the house (like maybe, build the signs in big with different text? ;D)
  4. AlfieJay

    Rejected Elemental

    Response: I didn't base my build on someone else's, so I'd love to know where you found a build like this so I can see how it's meant to be built :P
  5. AlfieJay

    Closed Quartz Heaven

    Vote: -1 Response: The whole theme was quite boring. The roofed area seemed incredibly pointless. The maze was bad, considering you could walk right through the walls. The first part where you have to go under the long bit of quartz was easily avoidable. Although, the variation with jumps was...
  6. AlfieJay

    Accepted HipsterWhale - Medium

    Vote: +1 Response: Good assortment of item when building the parkour. I found the theme funny. Can't think of anything bad to say! Well done! :D
  7. AlfieJay

    Accepted The Great Deku Tree - Hard

    Vote: +1 Response: The tree is really cool, the parkour was enjoyable. The only negative is that you can skip out the last checkpoint by climbing the leaves... (You should probably change that). Good job though! :D
  8. AlfieJay

    Rejected Lamp | Easy

    Vote: 0 Response: Not bad idea, but poorly executed. I think you should rebuild the actual lamp, because it looks boring as it is. Also, neos are a bit hard for an easy level, I think you should change them because it shouldn't be anything more than easy. Other than that, I enjoyed the...
  9. AlfieJay

    Rejected Fortnite Parkour - Easy/Medium

    Vote: -1 Response: I'm saying no because of several reasons: Firstly, none of the 3D builds are decent (like the bus, the wailing woods section), which is one of the most important things when theming a parkour level on a 3D game. Secondly, you seem to abandon your idea of having areas themed...
  10. AlfieJay

    Rejected Elemental

    Response: Thx for feedback, I have removed the maze as that was the area I was most unsure of. I've replaced it with a variety of parkour styles, so I hope you enjoy!
  11. AlfieJay

    Accepted Map Submission

    Vote: +1 Response: Cool theme, and well implemented into the actual parkour aswell. Only things I can critise are the many item frames with barriers to symbolise blockades, as long as it's clear to the player once, it should be obvious later on... Notice: Just checking, you do know it's the...
  12. AlfieJay

    Rejected map parkour : the bank

    Vote: -1 Response: I think that this map could be accepted if you change a few things. Firstly, the building doesn't resemble a bank, if you work on it for longer, it will do. Second, you need to place a pressure plate or something to signify the ending. Thirdly, I think the floor of the bank...
  13. AlfieJay

    Rejected Blue tower Hard

    Vote: -1 Response: Lots of barriers where you're meant to jump. At the top, it gave me the impression you just wanted to cram as much parkour into that bit as possible, with having to parkour completely around the top numerous times. On top of that, the theme wasn't very original. Other than...
  14. AlfieJay

    Rejected Mario - Hard

    Vote: -1 Response: Straight off the bat, single iron railing (against the build rules). Also, the entire focus of the map was the pixel art, which is also agaisnt the rules. The theme was very unoriginal and there's already a Mario map... Notice: Although pixel art is allowed, having the...
  15. AlfieJay

    Rejected Japanses Shrine parkour Hard

    Vote: -1 Response: I wouldn't rank this as a hard map, I would most likely make it a medium. At the moment, there is a way that you can skip out a MASSIVE chunk of the parkour. I originally though this was where you were meant to go because there isn't anything telling you to go behind the...
  16. AlfieJay

    Rejected Elemental

    Response: Thanks so much for the really fast feedback! I have added an explanation into the final room before the parkour to the roof about the characters for all those many people who wouldn't understand. I'm afraid I'd rather keep the maze as it is, because I would add parkour but the ground...
  17. AlfieJay

    Rejected Elemental

    Username: AlfieJay Map Name: Elemental Difficulty: I'd say Expert (not too sure) Theme: The first half of the map is parkour around the Chinese characters for the four elements (Fire, Water, Land, Air), the second half (inside the building) is just different types of parkour, within a themed...