Rejected 50's diner parkour (FIXED)

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/plot teleport 49ersDude 3
48 jumps
6 checkpoints
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helper Acid_reflvx
helper poparmy
helper CYAN_TOAD





just so you know the pictures are a little old.:)Also pls give Acid and pop credit they helped soooooooo much.
 

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Didn't get to finish editing but sure

Was fun to help
 

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Didn't get to finish editing but sure

Was fun to help
You can edit until the judges comment, just make sure to edit the thread with (Edit: This was edited etc..)
 

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im going to fill in for obamagaming: its a diner lol
 

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A diner is either a person, a restaurant, or a train car. Dinner is either a meal or a gathering around food. Therefore, if you’re referring to a person or place, diner is the correct word. To describe a meal or an event, you would want to use dinner, instead. Well i guess u are right all of that at the top was copied and pasted
 

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I'm sorry if I'm mistaken, but you've clearly built a resturant which in your OWN words would be described as a Diner. You haven't built a meal or event. :)
 

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LOL why is the English language so confusing lol.
 

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WE WON. DINER REIGNS ON TOP!
 

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diner
 

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Hey 49ersDude, poparmy and Acid_Reflvx!,

in my opinion, you have not used the opportunity this wonderful theme brings. I think your build is kind of boring and often lacks of good shape, as it looks like a sort of square what needs more detail.

The parkour is boring but it fits in the medium difficulty. But at some parts it's not really attached to the building what makes it look like it's messed up.

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The line of fences on the picture above just doesn't fit to the building,
You should try avoiding the use of loads of barriers, because it just messes up the parkour and confuses players.

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Especially this part was very confusing for me what doesn't make your map fun to play.

But I wish you three good luck with your map, and I hope you have a nice day/night!
Best regards,
Mika
 

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Yeah im going to fix the barrier part.
 

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why should I reapost it?
 

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So it will catch their attention and you made some changes.
This has no effect what so ever, the only thing you do by reposting is putting it further back in the queue. Just edit this thread 49ers
 
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