Rejected Addison Apartments - Hard

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A map based off the indie horror game 'Sally Face"
Creators: slumpd, Axetk, xSemo
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Difficulty - Hard
Checkpoints - 4
Jumps - 60-70
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Build looks very nice and accurate to the first image, the parkour is somewhat confusing, perhaps place some more signs to lead the way. I also find some jumps pretty hard for hard parkour, but I don't think it is a problem really.
+1 for me, good luck!
 

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Oh stop it Presidenten, You just hate me and i hate you so stop giving him likes and not me! I did not give you permission to go on mine and rate it
 

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Build looks very nice and accurate to the first image, the parkour is somewhat confusing, perhaps place some more signs to lead the way. I also find some jumps pretty hard for hard parkour, but I don't think it is a problem really.
+1 for me, good luck!
Thank you!! I appreciate the feedback! I have added more signs and item frames indicating where barriers are :)
 

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Oh stop it Presidenten, You just hate me and i hate you so stop giving him likes and not me! I did not give you permission to go on mine and rate it
@IPurpleYou when you make a map public, everyone can see it and rate it. No need to be like that.
 

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Oh stop it Presidenten, You just hate me and i hate you so stop giving him likes and not me! I did not give you permission to go on mine and rate it
This is unrelated to both the player who created the thread, and the thread itself, again I ask that you not be rude towards others, and that you only post your opinions of the map submission, as it's the intended purpose of the thread. :)
 

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The build is really accurate and well done, as well as detailed. The parkour has a really nice variety in jumps, and I really like the way the parkour is formed into the build, so it doesn't look messy and doesn't have too many floating jumps.
Good luck! :)
 

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The build is really accurate and well done, as well as detailed. The parkour has a really nice variety in jumps, and I really like the way the parkour is formed into the build, so it doesn't look messy and doesn't have too many floating jumps.
Good luck! :)
thank you <3
 

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Love the build and the jumps, Maybe slight buff and change to expert. Also, the map is slightly confusing but I get its supposed to be a bit of a puzzle map. I like the build and pk so +1
 

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Love the build and the jumps, Maybe slight buff and change to expert. Also, the map is slightly confusing but I get its supposed to be a bit of a puzzle map. I like the build and pk so +1
Thank you for the feedback! I believe a parkour map is more fun when the path isnt just simply laid out in front of you, but i completely understand the confusion! :)
 

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Hoi Slumpd, Axetk and xSemo,
I'm gonna put your map in reviewing for the following reasons :
-Even if your map is varied, I found it terribly repetitive, because your map is mostly head hitters, I will suggest you to use more the outside parts of your map, instead of the inside parts.
-The parkour is too hard in my opinion, it could be accepted as an expert, but if you can nerf it, it would be great.

For the rest, the theme pretty original, even if there is already some "Building" themed maps (or just maps which looks similar to your's), the build is also decent, and the parkour is varied, but feel repetitive and too hard in my opinion.

You have before the end of the month to patch the points I said before, you can still tell me directly in game when it's patched, but I will check the map again at the end of this month and will decide if I reject or accept your map.
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Hoi again,
Sorry to tell you that your map have been rejected,
The map got nerfed a bit, but I still think it's too hard, and there is still too many head hitters in my opinion, try to lower them please.
Feel free to resubmit your map when you want, but please try to patch the negative points.

Thanks for submitting your map, would be really good to see more maps from you !
 
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