Rejected Apple -Hard

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Hello CYAN_TOAD,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme of your map is original, there are a few fruit related maps, but there's no apple map yet, so good job on that!!
The build of your map is a main reason for the rejection of your map. Most of it is just floating trees standing on grass, and the big apple doesn't have the shape of an apple! Next time try to give it a better shape, because at the moment it looks like a red square with leaves on top.
Most of the parkour is floating, and overall it is very repetitive. You've mainly used ladder, fence and head jumps, but there are a lot more options to create parkour! You can make it more interesting with a better variation of blocks, such as flowerpots, pistons or just normal blocks! Next time make sure that every jump is possible, there's an impossible jump from a normal block to a fence at the entrance of your apple. At some point of your parkour, it was really confusing to find the correct way, but the length and difficulty fits as a
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.[Mika]

Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina
 
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