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Hello SacredPvP!
I am here to give you my review of the map!
Firstly I think the theme is GREAT since there shouldn't be any maps related to backyards or just yards in general. (Park) is the closest I can think of at the fly. Good work on the theme!
Secondly I think the build is GOOD. I personally really like the build but there's still those issues that were in your previous submission with the scaling. I don't know how much this will bother the map judges, but it definitely is a negative that there's those scaling inaccuracies! The hut for example isn't even the height of the fence!!!
Lastly I think the parkour of your map is OKAY. It meets all the basic requirements that I don't need to list here (cps, length, variation, no floating) but there are some issues with it. I think the parkour in your map is too difficult for an Expert map. You have built the map on the wrong facing (Expert should be X when you have it as Z) which means that the map will be rotated and the difficulty will change some jumps. I would nerf the map from quite a few spots! There's also one skip that I was able to find.
You can jump on the hut from the fence, skipping parkour inside the hut and around the other side of the fence. Not a huge skip but should still be fixed nonetheless!
Good luck :)
I am here to give you my review of the map!
Firstly I think the theme is GREAT since there shouldn't be any maps related to backyards or just yards in general. (Park) is the closest I can think of at the fly. Good work on the theme!
Secondly I think the build is GOOD. I personally really like the build but there's still those issues that were in your previous submission with the scaling. I don't know how much this will bother the map judges, but it definitely is a negative that there's those scaling inaccuracies! The hut for example isn't even the height of the fence!!!
Lastly I think the parkour of your map is OKAY. It meets all the basic requirements that I don't need to list here (cps, length, variation, no floating) but there are some issues with it. I think the parkour in your map is too difficult for an Expert map. You have built the map on the wrong facing (Expert should be X when you have it as Z) which means that the map will be rotated and the difficulty will change some jumps. I would nerf the map from quite a few spots! There's also one skip that I was able to find.
You can jump on the hut from the fence, skipping parkour inside the hut and around the other side of the fence. Not a huge skip but should still be fixed nonetheless!
Good luck :)
Hello xX_SacredPvP_Xx,
I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is original, as we don't have any maps based off of a backyard, so good job on that!
The build is the main concern here. It does not represent a backyard very well, and I think it could be greatly improved in this sense. I can tell what some of the structures are and how they relate to the theme, but overall this needs to be improved.
The parkour is varied throughout, although it is a bit messy. The length of the course and difficulty of the jumps are okay for the expert difficulty.
Also as mentioned above, you are already aware but this map does have the wrong facing for the difficulty.
Thank you for submitting your map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina
I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is original, as we don't have any maps based off of a backyard, so good job on that!
The build is the main concern here. It does not represent a backyard very well, and I think it could be greatly improved in this sense. I can tell what some of the structures are and how they relate to the theme, but overall this needs to be improved.
The parkour is varied throughout, although it is a bit messy. The length of the course and difficulty of the jumps are okay for the expert difficulty.
Also as mentioned above, you are already aware but this map does have the wrong facing for the difficulty.
Thank you for submitting your map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina
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