Rejected Bed-Man (Hard)

[NatharOs]

• Username - NatharOs
• Map name - Bed-Man
• The # of your Plot - /plot visit NatharOs 1
• Difficulty - Hard
• Number of jumps - 68
• Number of Checkpoint - 5

 

[Llighty]

-0.5 The build is good but most of the jumps are floating. There are also lots of ladders. This makes it repetitive in some places.

 

[Cogsworth]

-1 Jumps are repetitive like said above, and also I don't find the build as attractive since everything is very rectangular, and it looks like you spammed blocks on top of the man.

 

[NatharOs]

I totally understand for the construction, because I'm not very good at construction, for cons I do not understand how the jumps are repetitive, there are not many jumps that look alike

 

[Shinxray]

Hoi NatharOs,
Sorry to tell you that your map have been rejected.
The theme is quite interesting, there is no maps like that, so I guess it's original (There is still some maps, like BedroomPK or MessyBedroom, with a giant bed, but yours is still original). The build could be better, I agree with Llighty, the parkour is a bit floating, making the map a bit messy, I also think the blanket (like Tenkai said) looks a bit messy and unattractive. The parkour could also be better, I don't think the map is that repetitive (excepted the end, which is mostly ladders)(I will still suggest you using iron bars, water, soul sand, ice…), but I think the map is too hard for a hard (the 2nd to 3rd checkpont (I think), the double neo and the last ladder part are quite hard) and confusing (The barriers are a bit marked, but I still think there is a bit too much of them and they are a bit confusing).

Thanks for submitting your map, would be really good to see more maps from you !