Rejected Boeing - Ninkjeboi

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  • Username is Ninkjeboii
  • The name of the map is Boeing.
  • Photos of your Parkour are attached to this thread.
  • The # of your Plot / or warp name to my plot is: /plot visit Ninkjeboii 3
  • The difficulty is Medium in my opinion. The map has around 45 jumps and the jumps are a little too hard for the easy mode.
  • Number of jumps lays between 45 and 50

    The maker of the map is Ninkjeboii. There are no helpers. The build took me 2 days. This map has 4 checkpoints.
    I hope this map can make it to the list.

    Important to know: There is a wooden pressure plate at -1091, 69, -14133. This plate must tp you to this specific coordinate: -1141, 81, -14121

    Yours sincerely,
    Ninkjeboi

    PS: Sorry for the big amount of screenshots.
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-1 there is already an airplane map, also add some detail and make the build more attractive.
 

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Hey Ninkjeboi! :)
Here's a short review!

The theme is unoriginal since there are maps related to airplanes already.
The build is a little plain and uninteresting. I think you could use more different blocks.
The parkour of your map seems to be quite floating. Try to attach it more on your build.

Good Luck :D
 

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Hello Ninkjeboii,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is
unoriginal, as we already have an Airplane map (Airplane.) Before creating a map, please make sure that the theme has not already been done before by going here: https://manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/
The build is accurate to what you were going for, and there are quite a few details to be seen throughout the inside and outside, so good job on that! I can tell that you put a lot of effort into this!
The parkour is varied throughout, so good job on that! However, the parkour is floating quite a bit, particularly in the beginning (meaning it isn't attached to the build) which can make it appear messy. The parkour also gets quite a bit confusing once you reach the wing of the airplane, so please try to add some indicators for players so they don't get lost! (Example: heads with arrows, carpets, signs.) The parkour feels a bit too hard for the medium difficulty, so try to nerf some of your jumps!

Thank you for submitting your map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina
 
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