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Hello Arky__,
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The theme is original, and the build is accurate to what you were going for with some nice details throughout, well done in both these areas!
The parkour is the main concern. Overall, the jumps are varied nicely, but the issue is that the difficulty is inconsistent in quite a few areas. I will put a list of the requested changes below:
Add some vines on the jungle wood to widen the margin of error.
This starting chain feels quite rough.
Have clearer indication that there is a vine here.
Water jump is a rough way to end the checkpoint, consider double heads or an alternative landing.
You can get the button from the wall so it isn't really necessary to have a timed section here; normal jumps would be sufficient
This jump is quite precise; consider using a slab instead of a stair.
This jump needs to be changed.
Nerf the flower pot->head jump.
This is skippable in versions above 1.8.
This is a tricky x-facing jump; you could either adjust it or move the next checkpoint back here.
Also going to point out a few skips:
We already requested this jump be changed, but on 1.16+ you can just walk over here and jump in the water.
Skip here.
You can go up the fence and skip a lot of the map.
Another water skip with higher versions.
You have until one month from now (June 28th) to make these changes; if I have not been contacted about changes by this time, your map will automatically be rejected. This thread will now be closed, so please message me either here on the forums or on discord and we will review your map again.
Your map will now be put into reviewing.
The theme is original, and the build is accurate to what you were going for with some nice details throughout, well done in both these areas!
The parkour is the main concern. Overall, the jumps are varied nicely, but the issue is that the difficulty is inconsistent in quite a few areas. I will put a list of the requested changes below:
Add some vines on the jungle wood to widen the margin of error.
This starting chain feels quite rough.
Have clearer indication that there is a vine here.
Water jump is a rough way to end the checkpoint, consider double heads or an alternative landing.
You can get the button from the wall so it isn't really necessary to have a timed section here; normal jumps would be sufficient
This jump is quite precise; consider using a slab instead of a stair.
This jump needs to be changed.
Nerf the flower pot->head jump.
This is skippable in versions above 1.8.
This is a tricky x-facing jump; you could either adjust it or move the next checkpoint back here.
Also going to point out a few skips:
We already requested this jump be changed, but on 1.16+ you can just walk over here and jump in the water.
You have until one month from now (June 28th) to make these changes; if I have not been contacted about changes by this time, your map will automatically be rejected. This thread will now be closed, so please message me either here on the forums or on discord and we will review your map again.
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