Rejected Clocks - Easy

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IPattyI

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Hey Tree,

It pains me to have to tell you that I will be REJECTING your map.
  • Theme: The theme is not incredibly original, as we do have a map that falls under the "Clock" theme called "ClockTower". But, that build is very different from yours. So, I think the theme is okay.
  • Build: The build is not very good, it's far too simple and plain. The clock could use way better detailing, shaping, and block choices. It's just a semi-circle with minor details. The alarm clock is also very basic, it's just a rectangular box really. It just wasn't a very good execution of the theme.
  • Parkour: The PK length and difficulty definitely fit the easy difficulty, well done! But, it wasn't very enjoyable to do due to the poor variation in the blocks/jumps used. The beginning portion of hopping from invisible block to invisible block got very boring and there were multiple times where the player would just mindlessly jump from single block to single block.
I hope you take these criticisms into consideration when submitting maps in the future, good luck!
 
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