Rejected DJStand (medium)

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Hey superfroge,

It pains me to have to tell you that your map has been REJECTED.

  • Theme: There are no "DJ" or "DJ Stand" themed maps currently on the server, therefore your theme is most definitely original and creative.
  • Build: The build was not executed well, it somewhat looks like a DJ stand/rack. The sheer lack of detailing and dimensionality present in the build makes the build really unattractive. You could definitely do better, it's all just too simple and flat.
  • Parkour: The parkour was definitely long enough for a medium but it was way too easy for said difficulty. I recommend you buff the jumps on the map. Also, although I can clearly see you tried to make the parkour as varied as possible, sometimes it felt pretty repetitive. This is mostly due to the somewhat identical segments like where it would just be fence, ladder, or wool block. Try to make your parkour as varied as possible so it's as enjoyable as possible for the player.
I hope you take these criticisms into consideration when submitting maps in the future, good luck!
 
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