Rejected Down In The Mines | map by MangoPanda_123

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Hayleyx

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Hey there!
Sadly, your theme is unoriginal.
All of the parkour is floating which isnt allowed. Try having a main island alongside a main build so that the parkour can path around the build and have a nicer path/not be floating.
 

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Hello MangoPanda_123,

I regret to inform you that your map is REJECTED.

There really isn't a THEME to your map. Make sure you create a map around a base theme. The theme could be a character from your favorite video game or a scene from your favorite movie.

The BUILD of your map is a problem. There isn't a main build, it is just floating blocks. Next time try considering creating one main build with lots of depth and detail.

The PARKOUR fits the length and difficulty of a easy map, so good job on that! Your parkour is lacking variance, only things that are incorporated are regular jumps. To add more variance, try adding more jumps with unique blocks like pots, water, heads, vines, etc.

Thank you for taking the time to create a map, I hope to see more submissions from you in the future.
If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me on discord at Elly#5555
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