Rejected Dragon's Lair - Medium

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Username: lucyluv123
Map Name: Dragon's Lair
Level: Medium
Jumps: 68
Checkpoints: 3
Plot ID: -17; -95
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great build, bad theme and parkour could be less floating, 0
 

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Hello lucyluv123,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is a bit unoriginal, as we already have several maps relating to dragons (Dragon, DragonBattle, DragonPK.) However, we don't have any maps relating to a specific lair, so good job on that!
The build is accurate to what you were going for. It is well varied, and there are plenty of details to be seen throughout. I can tell that you put a lot of effort into this!
The parkour is the main concern. It is floating quite a bit, particularly in the beginning (meaning it isn't attached to the main build) which can make it appear messy. The parkour is also a bit repetitive throughout, with the use of fences, so please make sure that you incorporate different jump styles throughout your entire map! This may include; heads, lava, water, cake, cactus, and many different other types of jumps! The length of the map and difficulty of the jumps are good for the medium difficulty, so good job on that!

Thank you for submitting your map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina
 
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