Rejected Extinct - Easy

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ashnikko

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Oof...the theme of fossils are taken. The build looks very nice though. If the theme wasn't taken, the only thing I would suggest is to put it on a desert floor! That would look cool.

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Heyo ashnikko!
Thank you for your submission! Sadly your map is REJECTED.

The THEME of your map is unoriginal as we already have other extinction maps that are executed similarly; [Fossil]. When creating a map, try and come up with an original theme that isn't already used on the server. A full list of already accepted maps can be found here.

I love the BUILD for your map! Lots of detail and depth are incorporated throughout and it matches the theme spectacularly! One thing I might add though, is you could have build more detail surrounding the build, some rocks, and a floor would have been lovely!

The PARKOUR is a little bit of a problem, with this I mean is try to incorporate your parkour more within your build rather than have it floating! As well, the block choices for your jumps lack variance; I'd advise the use of a wider palette, such as: Ice, flower pots, heads, water, cobble walls, slabs, etc. These allow for you to create a more enjoyable parkour experience as it is not as repetitive throughout! Finally, your parkour matches both the easy difficulty and length perfectly, good work on this!

I want to thank you again for your submission and best of luck with future ones! [Jash]
If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me on discord at Elly#5555
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