Hello Matt!
I am here to give you my opinion on the map. Please remember that I am not a Map Judge and my opinion does NOT affect whether the map gets accepted or not. I'm just trying to give advice that I believe could help the chances of your map being accepted and the fun side of the map!
Manacube Parkour has three main criteria that you need to follow. I believe you know them already, but they are Parkour, Build and Theme. I will go through each of them thoroughly in this review.
Firstly the THEME of your Map Submission. I don't remember there being a map of this monument, which is good! However the build does look like a tower, and towers overall are a rather unoriginal theme. I hope this isn't an issue with the map, since I believe the other aspects of the map are good, which I will state next.
Secondly the BUILD of your Map Submission. After looking at a reference picture, I believe you have captured the appearance of the original monument pretty well. The build looks like the Fallout Monument, which is good! Great work on the build!
Lastly the PARKOUR of your Map Submission. After checking it out with you guys, I believe the parkour should fit all the guidelines! It fits the Easy difficulty you're going for length wise, and difficulty wise. The checkpoint placement is good, and the parkour was also fun! You had variety in the jumps, and the map wasn't boring, but you didn't take it to an extent where the jumps would have been varied for no the simple reason of using more blocks. I would really like seeing this map get accepted, I'm a fan of it!
I also couldn't find any shortcuts, as you had already patched them!
Good luck! :) +1