Rejected Grass - Easy (Noob)

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-Sninito9
-Grass (Green if possible)
-Plot coordinates (9270 71 -7588) first plot of Sninito9 (1#)
-Easy (noob)

-1 block jump
2 blocks jump
3 block jump (normal and diagonal)
ladder jump


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Hello <3,

Unfortunately I'll be giving this a -1. The theme is somewhat unoriginal, as there are already several maps relating to nature. The build is a bit plain; considering using different blocks and adding more variety next time. Speaking of variety, the parkour jumps also need more variation. Also, I know there's only a few in the beginning, but watch out for floating jumps. The parkour almost seems too easy for an easy; consider adding more difficult jumps.

I wish you the best of luck! <3
 

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I will also be giving a -1, the theme is unoriginal due to there being a lot of maps based off of Minecraft blocks, the build looks okay but as said above it is plain, and the parkour doesn't have much variation based on the pictures that only show normal jumps and ladders.

Good luck c:
 

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Hi there! Im sorry, but im gonna have to give this map a -1.
First of all, the theme is a bit unoriginal, and the build quite bland.
Secondly, the parkour is very basic and short, there needs to be a lot more variety. In my opinion its easier than an easy haha
Lastly, as Kat said, it does look messy due to the floating blocks. I know how hard it is to get a map accepted and i wish you the best of luck!
 

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Hey Sninito9

Unfortunately your map submission has been REJECTED. The build is quite unappealing and the theme is unoriginal. However I found the difficulty fitting but it could have been a bit more varied. Thanks for submitting your map and I hope to see more submissions from you in the future :D
 
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