Rejected Hard-Expert Crystal Shards

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ImJuiceh
Crystal Shards(Still debating the name tbh)
My 1st plot
Difficulty-Hard to Expert, I had some people say it had potential to be an Expert.
85 Jumps
Map making grind wont stop till I get one that's accepted.
 

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Thats pretty damn nice! :D
 

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Hi there ImJuiceh,

Im sorry to tell ya your map has been rejected.

The THEME is original so good on you for that.

The BUILD is lacking in detail. Maybe making the shards more prominent and detailing them more with the build would be beneficial. Maybe making a sphere with shards in it would be super cool.

The PARKOUR is lacking in variation, and is very inconsistent. Most of the jumps are easy-medium with expert jumps thrown in there, making it very inconsistent. You should also try to vary your jumps using different blocks a little more, not having sections with a whole bunch of fences and ladders at once.

Thank you for the submission, I hope to see more from you. Have a wonderful day !

-Ana
 
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