Home Made! Manacube KitPvP Trailer/intro [Season 11]

Myst

Active Member
ELITE
nyaea
nyaea
ELITE
Joined
Oct 20, 2021
Posts
26
Ratings
15
#2
Hi! The cosmetics of the Trailer are well done and professional, and I applaud you on that. However, I would like to recommend to work on the Grammar in your sentences, for example "You can buy enchant for item" should be "You can buy enchants for items"

I think the background music, video, transitions and the rest are done well however. Good job!
 

Evanue

Member
VIP+
Cheekynoodlez
Cheekynoodlez
VIP+
Joined
Dec 20, 2021
Posts
17
Ratings
6
#3
Hello! I'm not a KitPVP player myself, but I will say I did enjoy the trailer! Like Myst said, I think the general editing is done fairly well, but the grammar needs a bit of work. The music is good, too, that is one of my favorite songs! Also, do you plan on making more of these in the future? If so, I'd definitely check them out!

Keep up the good work!
 

nickclosed

Forum Expert
PATRON+
nickclosed
nickclosed
Patron+
Joined
Mar 5, 2017
Posts
334
Ratings
306 10
#4
Niceeeee