Rejected Honey Jars - Easy

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Hayleyx

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Heya,

I regret to inform you that your map has been REJECTED.
The theme is somewhat original as we do not have a honey jar map but we do have many bee maps. Try to focus your build even more on the honey jar itself.

The build is sadly lacking detail and depth and most of your parkour is floating whcih causes the map to look messy. Build one large build/island so you can path your parkour around that!

The parkour fits the length and difficulty of an easy map so good job on that. Sadly it is lacking variance as there's only normal jumps, fences and ladders. To add more variance you can use jumps such as cocoa beans, heads, water, trapdoors, daylight sensor, glass panes, slime jumps etc to make the parkour less repetitive and more enjoyable.

We hope to see more maps from you in the future!
Have a good day/night
-Hayley
 
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