Rejected Isle of Dawn - Expert

[khirina]

Howdy bastards I made a new map.

Name - khirina
Map Name - Isle of Dawn
Dif - Expert
Jumps - 87
CPs - 10
plot - /plot v khirina 11

This build is the temple from the Isle of Dawn from Sky. You should play it, its better than manacube for sure
Thanks to Pink, Tas and Pris for being cool testers theres that too

 

[Elly_x]

Hello khirina,

I regret to inform you that your map is REJECTED.

The THEME of your map is original, so good job on that!

The BUILD of your map is a problem. While the front/inside of the map is nice, the outside and back are very plain. The aspects on the black clay and back just are lacking so much. Next time try considering taking more time to add some depth and details on this part to really make a nice map.

The PARKOUR fits the length of a expert map, so good job on that! The parkour just wasn't fun, the pathing was weird causing it to be very confusing on where to go. The parkour felt very repetitive and had many annoying jumps everywhere. It also just felt inconsistent with the difficulty. I know you can do better Khi, I have seen your other maps and believe in you!

Thank you for taking the time to create a map, I hope to see more submissions from you in the future.
If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me on discord at Elly#5555
Elly