Rejected Kiwi Plate - Easy Parkour Map by Whynot690

[Whynot690]

/plot visit Whynot690 3
(edit - thanks to Urothun for pointing that out)

Name: Kiwi Plate
Jumps: 35
Checkpoints: 5
Difficulty: Easy
Credits: Playtested by Whynot960

 

[tRWUurga724kuKSr]

You forgot to mention in which plot it is / how to get in, so I'll add it right here

"/plot h Whynot690 3"

 

[Udun]

Looks actually pretty good!

 

[Whynot690]

Looks actually pretty good!

Thanks

 

[Anacoustic]

Hi there Whynot690,

Im sorry to tell ya your map has been rejected.

The THEME is semi unoriginal, we've just gotten a kiwi themed map.

The BUILD does have one main build which is great, but is lacking in detail. To make it more detailed, try adding textures to the table and spoon, and the wall of barriers you have on the build seems unnecessary... try spacing out the barriers more.

The PARKOUR is lacking in variation, but fits the length and difficulty of an easy map. Try to add more block varation such as water, flowerpots, trapdoors, etc !

Thank you for the submission, I hope to see more from you. Have a wonderful day !

-Ana