Rejected Magic Island

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#4
I like the parkour its cute and nice. I do agree when it gets to the end i get a little confused so maybe try adding some directions of where to go. So some slabs have been added to show where to go and now i get it so good luck on the map :).
 
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Theme
Not the best.
There is already some "Magic" theme (And there is also a lot of parkour with "Floating Island" in it) and the theme itself is not the most original. Be careful next time !

Build
Quite good.
The build looks good in global, I just don't really like the bottom of the big floating island, looks a bit messy because blocks are place a bit randomly.

Parkour
Can be better.
There is any variation of block in your parkour, try to had some ice, slime, ladder, fence.. even if it's a easy parkour.
Speaking of easy parkour, the balance between the difficulty and the amount of jump is good; but maybe try to buffed a bit your parkour because it's a bit too easy.

My opinion
Can be accepted, the build looks good but you need to do some improvement in your parkour.

Also I'm not a map judger, so their opinion can be different !
 
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Haii,

Thanks for submitting your map! I've come to inform you that this map will be rejected.

The theme has unfortunately been used countless times before. Try to pick an original theme in the future. The build is actually pretty decent and I'm happy with the fact that you used the build to have your jumps upon. Please keep on doing this on future maps. Also keep in mind to use as much variety as possible despite the difficulty, don't have one type of jump a few times in a row and then another one. Mix them up to keep it interesting.

Thanks again for submitting, we'd love to see another map sometime soon, so don't hesitate on making and submitting another one. :)
Also, if you have any questions or concerns, just PM me here on the forums or on Discord.

Submission format: http://forums.manacube.com/threads/must-read-map-submission-information-format.649/
List of current maps/themes: http://forums.manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/#post-73063
Map difficulty guide: http://forums.manacube.com/threads/map-difficulty-guide.16797/
 
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