Rejected Map Submission- Rail Cave Parkour- Ranked Easy- Made By DaTNTBoy

[DaTNTBoy]

Hey players of Minevast! Here is another map submission that I think is an Easy. There is screenshots below
and the warp is /warp RailCaveParkour. This map is a little dark so the screenshots are a little dark.
Screenshots:

Thanks! Hope you enjoy!

 

[Pud96]

need light xd but is nice

 

[DaTNTBoy]

need light xd but is nice

Spoiler

I actually replaced the torches and added with redstone torches.

 

[Pud96]

xd

 

[Billybo10000]

The map is being Rejected!

Why? Firstly, for an easy map, you have way too many of those ceiling jumps where you hit the ceiling. An average "Easy" player would not be able to do those jumps very well. They are more reserved for medium.

I would simply say change the wool to yellow, have it in medium and call it a day, but then it would be too quick.

I do love the choice of two paths which lead to the goal, although since they are exactly the same, why have two? (With Drakey's Temple map, both paths led to the same place, if I'm correct, these paths lead to separate finishes.

Also, some variation of move than just "Stone" would be great. Maybe some cracked bricks, stone slabs, just to give the cave a more ruined feel (There are rail tracks in there, so who made them, maybe add some stones on the bottom of the cave to show a collapsed rail track. Just extra detail that make it nicer).

Remember, you can always re-submit courses, or create a new one entirely.

~ Billy

 

[DaTNTBoy]

The map is being Rejected!

Why? Firstly, for an easy map, you have way too many of those ceiling jumps where you hit the ceiling. An average "Easy" player would not be able to do those jumps very well. They are more reserved for medium.

I would simply say change the wool to yellow, have it in medium and call it a day, but then it would be too quick.

I do love the choice of two paths which lead to the goal, although since they are exactly the same, why have two? (With Drakey's Temple map, both paths led to the same place, if I'm correct, these paths lead to separate finishes.

Also, some variation of move than just "Stone" would be great. Maybe some cracked bricks, stone slabs, just to give the cave a more ruined feel (There are rail tracks in there, so who made them, maybe add some stones on the bottom of the cave to show a collapsed rail track. Just extra detail that make it nicer).

Remember, you can always re-submit courses, or create a new one entirely.

~ Billy

Thanks for the feedback! I will sure to work on more of it soon. :)