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Before reviewing your parkour, I put some screenshots of it :p
Review c:
The theme :
The theme is not the most original, there is already a "Kitchen" map (Kitchen), so if you want to know if a theme is already used, check this thread ! (Yes it's from me lol) : Also, your build don't really fit with the theme, there is not a lot thing who show your parkour is a "kitchen" theme, so try to add like a stove, a pan or anything else
The build :
Don't look pretty good, need more detail on you furniture, and there is not a lot of decoration on it.
Also, try to decorate a bit the start because the "floating blocks" don't looks good.
The jumps :
I think your jump is a Hard parkour, there is not a lot of jumps (55 ?) but it's pretty hard.
Also, your jumps are quite varied (normal jump, ice, ladder, fence...), good point !
There is maybe too many neo jump and jump with blocks above it so try remove some of it !
My opinion :
I think your is not gonna be accepted IF you don't decorate more your build, try also to correct some negatives points.
And next time, be careful of the theme you used !
Last thing, I'm not a map judger, so the opinion of a real map judger (Txilsy or Shron) can be different !
Review c:
The theme :
The theme is not the most original, there is already a "Kitchen" map (Kitchen), so if you want to know if a theme is already used, check this thread ! (Yes it's from me lol) : Also, your build don't really fit with the theme, there is not a lot thing who show your parkour is a "kitchen" theme, so try to add like a stove, a pan or anything else
The build :
Don't look pretty good, need more detail on you furniture, and there is not a lot of decoration on it.
Also, try to decorate a bit the start because the "floating blocks" don't looks good.
The jumps :
I think your jump is a Hard parkour, there is not a lot of jumps (55 ?) but it's pretty hard.
Also, your jumps are quite varied (normal jump, ice, ladder, fence...), good point !
There is maybe too many neo jump and jump with blocks above it so try remove some of it !
My opinion :
I think your is not gonna be accepted IF you don't decorate more your build, try also to correct some negatives points.
And next time, be careful of the theme you used !
Last thing, I'm not a map judger, so the opinion of a real map judger (Txilsy or Shron) can be different !
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Hello,
Thanks for submitting your map! I've come to inform you that this map will be rejected.
Most of what I am going to say has been said by Shinxray before me, but here is my opinion anyways. The theme is not as original, but the build doesn't represent it either. Also, try building your jumps onto the build, rather than having them float around. That is not going to do anything besides making the course look messy and unattractive. Find a balance between the amount of jumps and the type of jumps as well, read the map submission info thread to see a guide of jump counts and their difficulty. I do like that you have a variety of jumps, so keep it up!
Thanks again for submitting, we'd love to see another map sometime soon, so don't hesitate on making and submitting another one. :)
Also, if you have any questions or concerns, just PM me here on the forums or on Discord.
Submission format: http://forums.manacube.com/threads/must-read-map-submission-information-format.649/
List of current maps/themes: http://forums.manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/#post-73063
Map difficulty guide: http://forums.manacube.com/threads/map-difficulty-guide.16797/
Thanks for submitting your map! I've come to inform you that this map will be rejected.
Most of what I am going to say has been said by Shinxray before me, but here is my opinion anyways. The theme is not as original, but the build doesn't represent it either. Also, try building your jumps onto the build, rather than having them float around. That is not going to do anything besides making the course look messy and unattractive. Find a balance between the amount of jumps and the type of jumps as well, read the map submission info thread to see a guide of jump counts and their difficulty. I do like that you have a variety of jumps, so keep it up!
Thanks again for submitting, we'd love to see another map sometime soon, so don't hesitate on making and submitting another one. :)
Also, if you have any questions or concerns, just PM me here on the forums or on Discord.
Submission format: http://forums.manacube.com/threads/must-read-map-submission-information-format.649/
List of current maps/themes: http://forums.manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/#post-73063
Map difficulty guide: http://forums.manacube.com/threads/map-difficulty-guide.16797/
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