Rejected MasterChief - Easy

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/plot v Blurpyfied 19
jumps: 21 per each side, 42 total
Checkpoints: 4 per each side, 8 total
Made by: Blurpyfied
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Heya!

I regret to inform you that your map is REJECTED.

The THEME is original as we don't have any maps like this on the server.

The BUILD of your map is a problem. The colors you choose are perfect, very good job on that! The main issue is the shaping. The front of the helmet is straight across and more rectangle on your build while the main helmet kind of meets in a v shape. The shape is flat, when it really needs to be shaped so a head can fit in it. There is also extra details on the top that I would love to see on the build.

The PARKOUR fits the length and difficulty of a easy map, so good job on that! The parkour is set up as a racing map, to be able to speed run it, but the parkour on the map is the complete opposite. If you want the map to be more of a race map, it needs to be more speedrunable. Also the parkour is a bit of random variance, when creating parkour try to have every jump be there for a reason and use creativity.

Thank you for taking the time to create a map, I hope to see more submissions from you in the future.
If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me on discord at Elly#5555
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