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Hello I will be giving you a review, please note I am not an Official Map Judge.
I'll be giving you a -1 for the reasons below.
Your theme, I'd say it isnt really Original, there is already 2 bear related maps. "Teddy Bear and "We Bare Bears".
Please remove the floor.
The parkour, doesn't look the best, It looks like it needs more variation, also please make sure to add signs.
Also here are some pictures of where you should put barriers.
With the glass panes, please remove those front ones and replace those with barriers.
I'll be giving you a -1 for the reasons below.
Your theme, I'd say it isnt really Original, there is already 2 bear related maps. "Teddy Bear and "We Bare Bears".
Please remove the floor.
The parkour, doesn't look the best, It looks like it needs more variation, also please make sure to add signs.
Also here are some pictures of where you should put barriers.
With the glass panes, please remove those front ones and replace those with barriers.
Hello _decibel_,
Unfortunately, I will be Rejecting your map.
The theme isn't very original, as there are a few bear/teddy bear themed maps already. I would recommend checking the document linked in this thread - https://manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/ to make sure your map idea is original.
The parkour feels a bit repetitive, try to experiment with the way you utilise blocks and items, to create more original and enjoyable jumps. I would also recommend putting more of the parkour focus on the bear, rather than leading to and floating around it, as a lot of the map felt like you were walking around the bear rather than parkouring.
The length and difficulty are good for an easy map.
Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.
Unfortunately, I will be Rejecting your map.
The theme isn't very original, as there are a few bear/teddy bear themed maps already. I would recommend checking the document linked in this thread - https://manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/ to make sure your map idea is original.
The parkour feels a bit repetitive, try to experiment with the way you utilise blocks and items, to create more original and enjoyable jumps. I would also recommend putting more of the parkour focus on the bear, rather than leading to and floating around it, as a lot of the map felt like you were walking around the bear rather than parkouring.
The length and difficulty are good for an easy map.
Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.
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