Accepted Paw Patrol HQ Resubmission - Medium

[WaffleLord47]

Rainbow_Llamaaa
Paw Patrol HQ

/plot v Rainbow_Llamaaa 1
Medium
about 50 jumps (3 checkpoints)
The main things I changed from the original is the materials I used to build (to give the build a bit more variety) I also added stairs to certain parts (to add shape to the build) and for the parkour I added ice and trapdoor jumps (for variety). I tried extremely hard to vary the parkour, I used every type of jump I could think of.

 

[WaffleLord47]

Edits: Fixed the impossible jumps and added soul sand jumps

 

[MCBYT]

+1. Didn't notice the impossible jumps last time, but they're fixed now so it isn't a huge deal. The variety is significantly better (btw, I can show you all the different types of jumps, so that you can vary your maps even more). The build is a tad better, I still think the wool is a bit harsh on the eyes but nothing too bad. Good luck!

 

[WaffleLord47]

+1. Didn't notice the impossible jumps last time, but they're fixed now so it isn't a huge deal. The variety is significantly better (btw, I can show you all the different types of jumps, so that you can vary your maps even more). The build is a tad better, I still think the wool is a bit harsh on the eyes but nothing too bad. Good luck!

Thank you for your feedback! I really appreciate it, also what is your minecraft username?

 

[MCBYT]

Thank you for your feedback! I really appreciate it, also what is your minecraft username?

My username is MCBYT, I usually log on early in the morning (like, REALLY early, 4-7 AM EST) or in the afternoon (4-9 PM EST)

 

[WaffleLord47]

Nerfed certain jumps making it more suitable for medium

 

[k_rissy]

Hello Rainbow_Llamaaa,

I'm going to be putting your map in reviewing; the main reason for this is the parkour. While I did work with you earlier to help nerf some jumps, it still feels a bit too hard for a medium map (and too short for a hard). The build has definitely improved since your last submission, but there could still be more detail (on the grass outside in particular). You have until September 30th to make these changes; if nothing has been done by that time, your map will be automatically rejected.

The theme is original and thoughtful, so I really hope you make these changes so it can be accepted!
This post will be locked from responses, so either message me on discord (InfinityxKatrina#2229) OR ingame by doing /mail send InfinityxKatrina <message> when you have made changes!

Have a nice day,
Kristina

 

[k_rissy]

Hello again,

You have added more detail and nerfed the parkour, so I am now happy to accept your map! (I also made one or two additional nerfs, just to be safe!)
Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina