Rejected peeebus - Mother Tree - Expert

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-1 theme is unoriginal and build could be better pk is also too floaty and repetitive
 

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Like they^ said, the theme is unoriginal as there are several floating island maps, as well as maps relating to nature. I love the detail with the vines on one of your islands, but overall, the build could be seen as plain. There are some floating jumps, which are a big of a negative. Also, your parkour could more variation. I think it may be too easy for an expert.

-1, but I wish you the best of luck! <3
 

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Hiya!
Unfortunately, I'll be giving this a -1 due to the fact that the theme is very unoriginal (as they said above), and the jumps could be more varied as almost all the jumps are the same. The build overall could be improved, I also think that the first few trees could be improved and more unique.
Either way, good luck! <3
 

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Hey peeebus, sorry to tell you your map has been rejected.

The theme is unoriginal since there are already lots of "tree" maps. The build is not good either since it's completely floating and the trees are very plain. The parkour is also not good (very floaty, decently varied but way too easy for Expert).

Thanks for submitting, I'd love to see more maps from you!
 
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