Accepted Ping Pong Table - Medium

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  • Bunstop
  • Ping Pong Table
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  • /plot v Bunstop 13
  • Medium
  • 56 Jumps
 
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Hey Bunstop, I usually don't comment on maps but Im going to give this a 0 for now. The theme seems original, but the build seems a little plain and unattractive in my opinion. Maybe try adding more detail to the paddles. Also seems like the parkour is focused on the left side more than the other side. I believe that the parkour is pretty varied though. Good luck!
 

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Hey Bunstop, I usually don't comment on maps but Im going to give this a 0 for now. The theme seems original, but the build seems a little plain and unattractive in my opinion. Maybe try adding more detail to the paddles. Also seems like the parkour is focused on the left side more than the other side. I believe that the parkour is pretty varied though. Good luck!
Thank you c: I'll try my best to fix the paddles and as for the parkour, I'll add some on the right side, buff it and make it a medium if there's enough jumps

(Edit: I've changed the paddles and made the map Medium by using both sides)
 
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Thanks for the review c: I'll definitely find time to change where the parkour is located, and I loved your idea of scuff marks, so I'll be adding those in when I find time as well
 

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Hello,

I am happy to tell you that your map has been accepted! The theme is original. The build is accurate to a ping-pong table, but it could be better. The parkour has a lot of variety and the jumps are challenging, but in the future it would have been better if the jumps were incorporated with the ping-pong concept. The jumps also match the difficulty.
Thank you for submitting your map, I would love to see more from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina
 
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