Rejected Pocketbuilder - Vapor Light (Easy)

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(Sometimes other posts show up at a similar time and we don't see that someone has posted. I apologize)

I'll be giving this a 0. I believe that the theme is original, but I'd be lying if I said I knew the theme. The build is well-done and it's appealing to look at; however, it may be considered a bit plain. Consider using blocks other than wool. As for the parkour: Consider adding more variety with the jumps. I believe it fits the easy difficulty.

I wish you the best of luck! <3
 
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Made a few edits based on Katrina's suggestions.
  • Changed all of the wool to Stained Clay
  • Added some more ladder jumps, a few water jumps, a few slime block jumps, and a few pane jumps
  • Revamped the end (it felt a little boring before)
 

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Hey, so I'm going to REJECT this map. The build is a bit messy at the end as well as not being too clear. The parkour is also quite repetitive although the water was a nice touch (Shinxray nicely fixed it for you). Thanks for submitting your map :D
 
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