Accepted Shiny Trinket - Medium (Resubmission)

[JM4s]

> Map Builder: JM4s <

> Map Name: Shiny Trinket <

> Difficulty: Medium <

> Number of Jumps: 50 <

> Number of Checkpoints: 5 <

> Plot info: /plot v JM4s 3 <
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Spoiler: Main changes

The random space dust is now gone and the build is a lot smaller now. The map start is now a lot simpler and is incorportated into the main build. As for the parkour, I nerfed the most annoying jumps, changed some parts that didn't feel fun to play imo, and added a lot of arrow heads that indicate where to jump next.

Spoiler: Photos (of main changes)

 

[TimeLP]

i liked it before, i like it even more now. very nice!

 

[Elly_x]

Hello JM4s,

I will be putting your map in ONGOING as I have tested and reviewed your map. Please be patient as I discuss your map with the map judging team.

If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me on discord at Elly#5555
Have a great day,
Elly

 

[Elly_x]

Hello JM4s,

I will be putting your map into the reviewing stage. This means that your map isn't accepted or rejected. There are parts of your map that are solid but also parts that could be fixed before being fully accepted. You have until April 18th to fix the needed changes or your map will be automatically rejected.

The THEME of your map is original, so good job on that!

The BUILD of your map is good. The space of the map is much better with nice details. It is attractive and accurate for what you are going for without being messy and to large.

The PARKOUR fits the length and difficulty of a medium map, so good job on that! The first half of the parkour was nice, but the second half is the main problem. It felt very cramped and messy during this half. Try fixing this up with possibly a better path and reworking the parkour.

Thank you for taking the name to create this map, if you have any questions or have made the needed changes message me on discord at Elly#5555 so we can retest the map.
Elly

 

[Elly_x]

Hello JM4s,

Thank you for making the needed changes on your map! You map is now accepted, the map feels a lot better with the parkour. We did have to remove some barriers as there was a lot of random not needed ones.

I hope to see more submissions from you in the future!
If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me on discord at Elly#5555.
Elly