Rejected SleepySloth - Easy

[ItzSlez]

Usernames: ItzSlez
Map name: SleepySloth
Plot: 6039, -15440
Difficulty: Easy
Number of Jumps: 30
Number of Checkpoints: 3

 

[FireWolf1985]

the pk itself is good! but the sloths face looks a little pixalated

 

[TheColux]

ooOOOH! The parkour looks gooood, however I'd reccomend try adding a little bit more details to the head, as menionted above, respecfully it looks pixalated <333

 

[ItzSlez]

the pk itself is good! but the sloths face looks a little pixalated

Sure thing i'll add more detail

 

[Shinxray]

Hello ItzSlez,

I am sorry to tell you this map is being rejected.
The theme is original, as there are no other Sloth maps yet on ManaCube.

The build is really cute, but is very boxy. Smoothing out the body and arms, as well as rounding out the face more would make the build look much nicer. I would also add a platform underneath so that the sloth isn't just floating: not necessary but would be a nice touch.

The parkour is not super varied, and pretty repetitive. It suits the difficulty for the most part, but is kinda boring and not the most exciting to play. The pathing is also a little odd, there are directions given, but the course doesn't flow well with the current pathing.

I will say that this map does have potential and is a great first try at making a map, so don't be discouraged!
Thank you for submitting this map, we would love to see more submissions from you!
(Ty Quinnyp for the text !)