Rejected The Persistence of Memory

[A Pink Cow]

Hiya, Pink here with a map submission!

Name: Pink_Bovine (A Pink Cow#1902)
Map Name: The Persistence of Memory

Plot: /plot v Pink_Bovine 1
Difficulty - Hard
Jumps: 62

About the map: The Persistence of memory is probably the most famous surrealist painting by Dalí, you've probably heard of it as the 'Melting clocks' . The map features 3 of the distorted watchfaces, along with a dead tree that towers above.

Fun fact: Dali was inspired to paint this by watching Camembert cheese melting in the sun

The parkour itself features jumps such as:
- Thematic headhitters in the first section
- A couple neos w/ blockage in the vertical climb in the dead tree
- Slime jumps dotted throughout

Thanks in advance!
Pink

 

[zzykrkv]

OMG ITS THAT PAINTING

 

[A Pink Cow]

IT IS! someone finally recognises it I'll link it

 

[Tas]

this is brilliant

 

[A Pink Cow]

this is brilliant

ahaha thank you Tasses!! You have no idea what it means to have such a legendary figure rate your map!

 

[Tas]

ahaha thank you Tasses!! You have no idea what it means to have such a legendary figure rate your map!

excuse me wot

 

[A Pink Cow]

well, your acknowledgement !

 

[Quinny]

Hello Pink_Bovine,

I am sorry to tell you that this map is being rejected. However, I could see this becoming a really amazing map with some revisions to the parkour. Feel free to resubmit this if you decide to make changes! The theme is pretty original. While there are other clock themed maps, this map is very different as it is a painting. The build looks great! It is recognizable as the reference painting. Well done!

The parkour is where the map falls a bit short. There are some issues with difficulty throughout the map, where some parts are very easy, and other jumps (such as paneups, ladder neos, to name a few) are jumps that are too hard for the hard difficulty. Some of the parkour was also not mixed very well (especially the beginning section with the many slabs in a row). I also felt the path was a bit confusing in some spots, while you did include directional carpets and signs, the path was a bit winding and hard to follow. Also beware of some skips in the map, I found this one but there may be others: http://prntscr.com/ujmkto

Thank you for submitting this map! If you have any questions, feel free to message me here on the forums, in-game, or on Discord. Hope to see more maps from you soon!