Rejected Thunderstorm | Parkour Medium

[Jackiee]

• Username: Jackiee_ (Plot home Jackiee_)
• Map name: Thunderstorm
• Photos of your Parkour: https://imgur.com/Z3X6qlq https://imgur.com/a/jyscCxO https://imgur.com/a/UEHkxjP
• The # of your Plot / or warp name to it #1
• Difficulty (Easy, Medium, Hard, Expert, Insane) Medium
• Number of jumps (Optional) 43, probably not exact. But it is the closest.

 

[Blurpyfied]

looks good +1 but i suggest making it a little smaller and use some more orange in the thunder areas

 

[Jackiee]

looks good +1 but i suggest making it a little smaller and use some more orange in the thunder areas

yeah i know its quite big and can be overwhelming but its kinda the point, its a storm lol. and about the more orange i tried it couldnt find anything to make it look good

 

[ban]

Hey Jackie,

I think this map is absolutely AMAZING. The time, dedication, and effort you put into this deserves a +1 from me :)

Have a beautiful rest of your day Jackiee and good luck.

 

[OneOfTheStars]

I like it, it's nice. +1
Big but I'd like to see it around.

 

[Jackiee]

BUMP!

 

[JakeNoot]

+1, the map is beautifully made and is very visually appealing. The parkour looks to have lots of variety, and looks like fun. Good luck!

 

[ciera]

1+ I think the build and the parkour was great <3

 

[Jackiee]

@Shinxray @Lxcify I'm sorry for ping, but I've been waiting to long.

 

[Blurpyfied]

@Shinxray @Lxcify I'm sorry for ping, but I've been waiting to long.

my first map that was accepted in april and didnt get accepted towards middle of june. I know how you feel.

 

[Okaylie]

This build is so creative and well done! +1 I play Parkour quite often and would love this to be added! <3 GL

 

[JakeNoot]

@Shinxray @Lxcify I'm sorry for ping, but I've been waiting to long.

It takes a long time for judges to review maps sometimes- be patient! It’ll help in the end and your map will be checked out eventually. I’ve had some maps up for a month or even two before acceptance or denial, so just be patient and keep waiting!

 

[Shinxray]

Hoi Jackiee_,
Sorry to tell you that your map have been rejected.
The theme is pretty original, even if there is already a "Clouds" map, adding thunder is interesting. The build is average, look nice, but all those glass pane can makes people lag, and most of your parkour is floating around the build, making your map messy. The parkour could be better. it's a bit varied, but it's a bit repetitive and boring, mostly because we climb a lot in your map.
However like I said before, the theme is interesting, and the build is nice.

Thanks for submitting your map, would be really good to see more maps from you !