Rejected TomatoTown - Easy

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#1 victory royale yeah fortnite we bout to get down (get down) 10 kills on the board right now just wiped out tomato town
 

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Hey nate,

I will now put your map into ONGOING as I have tested and reviewed your map. Your map will now be discussed amongst other judges.

Please be patient as this may take some time. If you have any questions, feel free to start a conversation with me on the forums, or message me on discord.
 

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Hey,
I will put this map in reviewing for the following reasons :
-The build needs some small improvement, mostly making the floor a bit more attractive (maybe making a pizza floor ? Mostly something else than a generic pattern), the build itself could also be improved, mostly missing the pizza slice in front of the character, and add more decoration inside the build.
-The parkour needs some rework, it's very hard for an easy and the pathing is very wonky. I would suggest some jumps and the pathing a bit sot it has a better flow (the very first pot could be moved more toward the start for a better flow, the fence right after the trapdoor at the very start is unnecessary and makes this jump quite annoying, the whole green part with the ceiling is very hard and annoying, the maps has a lot of sharp turns, some parts of the parkour could be more decorated/changed, mostly some of the floating parkour, and the parkour is overall too hard).

Feel free messaging me on discord if you need help. I will let you 30 days to makes the changes requested, if nothing has been done, the map will be automatically rejected.
 

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Hey,
Since I did not get a response and nothing changed, I will automatically reject the map, feel free submitting it again when changes has been done.

Thanks for submitting your map.
 
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