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Loading Status...Rejected TommyInnit - Expert
- Thread starter Blurpyfied
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Hello,
Unfortunately, your map is being REJECTED. Here is my input:
Theme: The theme is original as we do not have any TommyInnit themed maps, so good job.
Build: The build is decent. I think you should change the sword because it is misshapen and the colors are quite ugly. The organics aren't bad, but the proportions of the various body parts are quite off (for example, his feet are the same length as his legs and his chest). I'd suggest rebuilding his arms and shoulders and chest region, as they look very funky from the front and the shape of his belt up is reminiscent of a vase and not of a human. His face is pretty good, and the flag is also good.
Parkour: Your parkour is very problematic. Redstone contraptions like this piston jump are not allowed, so if you could replace that jump and any others like it that would be good. The difficulty and length fit an expert map for the most part, but your parkour is overall just very annoying to play. I'll include a list of the jumps that I am very negative towards below. The parkour is decently varied, so good job there. I think the difficulty does vary a bit much as the interior section of Tommy and the ~5 jumps before it are very easy with the exception of the blip and the slime, and the flag section of the parkour is also on the easier side. Also if you could specify where the barriers are when you enter Tommy's head it would clear up confusion there.
I'd love to see more submissions from you in the future, and have a great day!
List of Bad Jumps:
Trying to hit this button in the water is honestly just a pain to do.
Having luck vines like this is annoying enough without the fences too
Don't really have much else to say about this jump, I'd just get rid of the fence
Specify where to go on this jump and really just this whole section is quite confusing
Unfortunately, your map is being REJECTED. Here is my input:
Theme: The theme is original as we do not have any TommyInnit themed maps, so good job.
Build: The build is decent. I think you should change the sword because it is misshapen and the colors are quite ugly. The organics aren't bad, but the proportions of the various body parts are quite off (for example, his feet are the same length as his legs and his chest). I'd suggest rebuilding his arms and shoulders and chest region, as they look very funky from the front and the shape of his belt up is reminiscent of a vase and not of a human. His face is pretty good, and the flag is also good.
Parkour: Your parkour is very problematic. Redstone contraptions like this piston jump are not allowed, so if you could replace that jump and any others like it that would be good. The difficulty and length fit an expert map for the most part, but your parkour is overall just very annoying to play. I'll include a list of the jumps that I am very negative towards below. The parkour is decently varied, so good job there. I think the difficulty does vary a bit much as the interior section of Tommy and the ~5 jumps before it are very easy with the exception of the blip and the slime, and the flag section of the parkour is also on the easier side. Also if you could specify where the barriers are when you enter Tommy's head it would clear up confusion there.
I'd love to see more submissions from you in the future, and have a great day!
List of Bad Jumps:
Trying to hit this button in the water is honestly just a pain to do.
Having luck vines like this is annoying enough without the fences too
Don't really have much else to say about this jump, I'd just get rid of the fence
Specify where to go on this jump and really just this whole section is quite confusing
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