Rejected Troposphere - Very long but not super difficult parkour map

[breadfish71]

I (breadfish71) built a very long, 6-stage parkour course that I'm calling Troposphere, and I did it by myself over a period of around 5 or 6 months. Even though I counted 263 jumps (or 267 if you go the regular way on stage 6), it shouldn't be too difficult for a moderately experienced parkourist to finish, so I suggest a Medium or *maybe* a Hard difficulty. It's also very wide, but not quite wide enough to not meet the width requirement (107 by 110 blocks). I took a bunch of screenshots (below), and it's on plot 17;-102. It's not super likely that it'll get accepted because of its length-to-difficulty ratio, its several different themes, and because it's not centered around any single build/structure, but I'm submitting this anyway and I hope it still makes it in.

 

[Elly_x]

Hello breadfish71,

I regret to inform you that your map is REJECTED.

The THEME of your map is unoriginal, as we already have maps based around biomes. Before creating a parkour please make sure to check out this template here to see all the maps accepted on the server!

The BUILD of your map is a problem. The map was entirely made up of floating islands with only a bit of detail added. Next time try considering making one main build with lots of depth and detail that goes with your theme.

The PARKOUR fits the difficulty of a medium map, so good job on that! The length was way to long, try to stick around 40-60 jumps with medium difficulty. Your parkour is lacking variance, only things that are incorporated are regular jumps, ladders and ice. To add more variance, try adding more jumps with unique blocks like pots, water, heads, vines, etc.

Thank you for taking the time to create a map, I hope to see more submissions from you in the future.
If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me on discord at Elly#5555
Elly