Rejected Up-Easy/Medium

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Map Name: Up
Creator: TheSalemGamer
Difficulty: Easy/Medium
Jumps: 39
Checkpoints: 1
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Not a parkour player, just wanted to give some feedback. I liked the house being highly saturated by the wool, however I personally think that the color combination of the house can be improved. I don't think green, yellow pink and blue go well together. Once again, just my opinion. I won't address the technical side of the parkour considering that's not really my field of expertise. Nonetheless, I do like the idea.
 

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I don't think green, yellow pink and blue go well together.
Tthis was based on the up movie, so the color combination is a copy of that. The parkour, despite floating still has a nice look, but my criticism is that it needs more balloons! In the movie they took up more space than the house itself.
 

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-1 theme is unoriginal (Map under donator)
 

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For everyone Saying that its unoriginal I found out about the donator map after I had already finished it. I still posted it because the worse they will do is Reject it.
 

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Hey TheSalemGamer, sorry to tell you your map has been rejected.

The build is decent, it looks like the house from Up, but it's a little simple and like was said above it would look better if there were more balloons, imo. The parkour isn't great, it's not very varied since we see a kind of jump once and then never again in the map. It's also pretty short for a Medium. The main problem is obviously the theme since there is already a map with the exact same thing (Up).

Thanks for submitting, I'd love to see more maps from you!
 
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