Rejected 50's diner pk (should I give up already?)

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50's diner pk
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/plot v 49ersDude 3
helper poparmy
helper Acid_Reflvx
helper BinLickerLover
tester CYAN_TOAD
48 jumps
5 cps
Just so u know PLS TELL ME if there is anything I need to improve thank you.
 

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I think that most know the pics already but does it matter?
 

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I JUST NEED 1 MAP TO GET ACEPTED 1 MAP
 

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please lord help me... its diner
 

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sorry LOl
 

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Hello, I will be giving this map a -1

The build doesnt really look attractive, meaning it could be better.
The parkour isnt really good at all. I found a few things that might be annoying to others.


Trapdoor should be changed to iron trapdoor
The last room, I found one jump quite hard for a medium, also you can literally skip all the jumps in the last room and go to the minecart.
I also found the map very confusing.
 

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Hello 49ersdude,

I regret to inform you that your map is REJECTED.

The THEME of your map is original as there are no other diner themed maps on ManaCube, so good job on that!

The BUILD of your map is a problem. The outside is very plain and doesn't really resemble a 50's diner much. The inside is quite a bit messy and cluttered. I think enlarging the build can fix the inside issue while also allowing for more accurate details.

The PARKOUR fits the length and difficulty of a medium map, so good job on that! The parkour is also not that enjoyable with most of it being head-hitters or corner jumps that don't flow well together. The parkour is also kind of confusing, I suggest adding directional signs

Thank you for taking the time to create a map, I hope to see more submissions from you in the future.
If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me on discord at Elly#5555
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