Hello narrowkaku,
I regret to inform you that your map is being
rejected.
The theme of your map is
unoriginal since there are multiple maps based off of circus already. When making a map, please check the parkour list (
https://manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/) to make sure that you always have an original theme in mind, something that adds something new to the server.
The build of your map kind of looked like a circus from outside, but it
needs more detail. The interior is also lacking detail, the viewers on the side looked a little
odd and sadly don't make the map interesting enough.
The parkour of your map
mostly fit an easy map difficulty wise, even if some of the jumps were a little hard, so great work on that! However your parkour isn't very well varied, or interesting to play. Most of it is fences with a couple different types of jumps implemented.
Try to have your parkour varied at all times, so it doesn't get boring. Your map also felt quite sluggish, as there was a lot of unnecessary climbing. Most of your parkour was also floating, which should be avoided.
Try to build your parkour attached to a main build in the future!
[Gamers]
Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina