Rejected "A New World" - Easy Jumps & Normal Length

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Hello DerockGamer,

Unfortunately, I will be Rejecting your map.
The theme is not original, as there are many biome/floating island themed maps. Please refer to the document in this thread - https://manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/ to make sure your map idea is original.
The build isn't great, as it is just smaller islands, however it is accurate to the theme which is good.
The parkour is quite repetitive, as majority is normal blocks, with a couple sequences of ladders and fences. Try to experiment with a wider variety of blocks and items when building jumps, as well as mixing them up a bit more throughout your map, as this will make your map more enjoyable to complete.
Quite a lot of the parkour is floating, try to have one or two main builds in your map, then incorporate your jumps into that more, to try and avoid having too many floating jumps, as floating jumps can make your map look a bit messy.
The difficulty is good for an easy map, and the difficulty is good for a medium map. Try to match up the length and difficulty, rather than having a map that is too long for it's difficulty.

Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.
 
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