Hello Aslv,
I regret to inform you this map is being
rejected. The theme is
not original, there are lots of abandoned/dystopian, or lava themed maps already on ManaCube (AbandonedTrainwreck, AbandonedCave). Check the
Parkour List before building a map to make sure your theme is original. Even so, I'm
not quite sure what the theme is aside from the title, there
aren't many details at all that communicate what this structure is. I would recommend adding more details and texturing to the building to better show that it is a building or facility.
The parkour
could be improved a lot. It is
not varied or mixed at all, since you used pretty much all normal blocks with some slabs and ladders here and there.
Try to use many kinds of blocks all throughout your map to make sure you make a unique and fun course! You can see examples of recently accepted maps at /warp beta on the server, or in the Accepted Maps subforum.
Thanks for submitting this map! If you have any questions, feel free to message me here on the forums, in-game, or on Discord.