Rejected Abandoned Temple

[Dingocloud]

Username: Dingocloud
Map name: Abandoned Temple
Difficulty: Medium-Hard
Creator(s): Dingocloud
Plot: /plot visit Dingocloud 1

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[PyroTortilla]

Hello,

I will unfortunately be REJECTING your submission for a few key reasons:

Theme: The temple theme is overused on Parkour maps and is not very original. Please refer to our Map List to make sure that you choose a unique theme for your maps.

Build: The outside of the build is not very great. The vines on the desert temple give it a rather ugly appearance and the outside view of the map in general is a bit of a mess.

Parkour: There were a few skips on your map (https://prnt.sc/uoud0o), so be sure to look out for those (if you cannot avoid a skip, you can always resort to /barrier to block it off, but this isn't preferable). The difficulty was very inconsistent, with some jumps being very easy and some jumps taking multiple attempts. Try to make your parkour the same difficulty throughout! The parkour itself was also very repetitive, with rooms of all ladders or rooms of all panes, etc. Try to use different blocks such as anvils, vines, flower pots, heads, and more to make your parkour more fun and varied.

I'm looking forward to seeing more submissions from you in the future, and have a great day!