Rejected Airkour - Medium

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Map Builder: GothicHamster

Map Name: Airkour

Difficulty: Medium

Number of Jumps: 104

Number of Checkpoints: 12

Plot Info: ID: -131;-27
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Nathanpls

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The part inside the boat is very dark, almost impossible to see where you're going.


Also the ending doesn't have a ending pressure plate with a wool under it.
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Yo GothicHamster.
Sadly, I shall be rejecting your map.

The THEME is unoriginal as we already have a few airship-themed maps.

The BUILD of your map is outstanding, I love the intricate detail that you have added throughout the ship and it looks very accurate to something that you would see in a fantasy novel! However, the build is too wide, as it would go over the 120-block map width limit we have on parkour maps. Read more here; https://manacube.wiki/parkour/making-maps/parkour-maps

Finally, the PARKOUR. The difficulty is inconsistent throughout and the map is too long for a medium. The course also lacks variance throughout your jumps, try to add more unique blocks into the mix rather than just plain normal block jumps. Navigation is lacking, so adding a few more signs would fix this!

Any issues, feel free to contact me on discord.
- Jash
 
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