Hoi DikaSmuasha,
Sorry to tell you that your map have been rejected.
The theme is.. original I supposed ? The build is not really good, it's pretty messy because it's a lot of scattered builds and not one main build, making your map unattractive too. The parkour is not really good too, it's pretty repetitive and really confusing, I would like if you add more signs to indicate the path, and add more type of blocks like ice, soul sand, fence…
Thanks for submitting your map, would be really good to see more maps from you !